Comments : An Illusion

  • 16 years ago

    by Rheingold

    Something we all sadly have to experience at least once. The last line sums up everything real nice.

    But in the long run, who wants to be with someone who doesnt want to be with you? That's how I looked at it after the 'love of my life' vanished.

    Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Very good heart felt poem i really enjoyed reading it

    ashleigh