Hey we all have writers block it is just how we deal with it that matters. hope you fell better and i hope that your poems keep coming
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:~)Sam

Aww nice. very sweet and intresting to read
kepp them coming
Fillie

Anything to fake reality,
She changes the end,
Now shes in a dream world,
Trying to pretend,
^^^
Excellent stanza .... changing parts in hopes of having a different outcome....

Killing off family members,
With the power of her mind,
Shes getting revenge,
But shes only trapped in time
^^^
Loved this ending ....
Glad to see you've escaped the clutches of writer's block ... they sure can have a grip on us by times.

Luanne

I hate writer's block i understand the feeling but this is an excellent poem to come back with after that. lol wonderful poem the title did capture me though keep writing thanx for the comments.

Writer's block is a pain in the rear lol. Nice start up after one though, 5/5, Em x