Comments : Lose it all

  • 16 years ago

    by chiildhoodMEMOiiRS x

    Herrow.

    I <3 how it ends with the __same__ paragraph. Your rhyming skills are a bit average so I really do hope you can improve because I truly think you can go far with your talent. Keep it up and keep writing.
    Deeply enjoyed reading that poem. Time well spent
    ;]

    Kim_____>&*]]

  • 16 years ago

    by MeeyCie

    I just comment all your poems because they are soo good :) love you that much . You arent alone Honeybunny:)