Comments : Heartbreaker

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    GREAT poem! Loved your 'mama's' words and the last stanza was great! Your wording is awesome, and i love your work!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    My Mama warned me about boys that look like you,
    Said that "a pretty boy just ain`t worth my heart and time,
    `Cuz when it comes down to it, the only thing they do,
    Is break the purest hearts to gain some kind of sublime.

    LooVe it!!
    5/5 <3

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Ooft, this was wonderful! I had no favourite parts, and no least favourite - it was all just perfect. The rhyming, the flow, wording - everything.

    Perfect.