Okay. i frigging loved this. i don't even know what to say...and that doesn't happen to me very often. this...is beautiful. just beautiful. There's not a thing i would change about this. i was going to paste my favourite part but then realized i would be pasting the entire piece. wow. i can't get over this one. i read this and was like how mamy people will be able to relate to this? i bet it's a lot. this is going into my favourite poems. definitely. amazing work on this.
Wow. This was.. Simply brilliant, to be frank.
Your rhyme was flawless, the story and moral.. Flawless. I'm kind of taken aback, to be honest. This was an amazing piece of literature and could touch so many people's lives.
A very, very good piece love, I even voted it a 5/5, and I never do that. From the very first stanza the piece was brilliant, and you kept its greatness throughout. I truely loved what was being said, perhaps because I can completely relate. I feel exactly the same way, especially with the first stanza. My favorite stanzas were the first, second and forth, with obviously my favorite favorite being the first one. It was brillaint! I loved it! Once again, well done my love.