I really like this poem . X

Your poems are really good, they flow so well and truelly portray your feelings to the reader. very sad tough...best of luck :)

You didn't actually stated what poem you wanted to be commented, so i just picked this one...

loved your first comparison... it was very well thought and original...

Your whole poem has an extreme sadness I can completely relate to... Although it seems like love is never going to knock on our door, it is only a matter of time...

I am pretty sure that you will fall in love sometime... Fate is something quite tricky...

don't know if you noticed... but you wrote a sonnet... :) not the regular kind of sonnets... (rhyme scheme is a little bit different...)
maybe you'll be known someday by the invention of a new sonnet ;)

quite original structure, i must say...

your poem is really well written... incredibly sad, though

*keep up*
isabel

(i noticed you only posted 3 poems yet... have you thought of posting a little more? ;) )