Cheer up. Shakespeare hates your emo poems.

Touching write...

Never given the chance to truly fly,
Not one opportunity, you let me die.
^^
well penned

keep writing :)

Wow you really penned down a great write... a poem which i am sure youths will be able to relate to it.The flow was very smooth...

Never given the chance to truly fly,
Not one opportunity, you let me die.

-I like the way you end, which gives a feeling of hopeless that you would rather die than live in this life

Excellent Job
5/5 from me