Comments : Desired Love

  • 11 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I liked this poem and i liked how you asked him to be your with a very beautiful way

  • 11 years ago

    by Boy

    All poem was nice. but i realy liked one line alot
    Why it is so hard to follow your heart

    thts it.

    so hope for the best in the next. take care 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A very nice write.. a well expressed piece.. keep them coming

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    Wow really good
    like it
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by zaheer

    Hey, really love this poem, It's great.
    Guess you were thinking about the one you love when writing this poem.

    I love this part " Give me these tears which flow from your eyes," It's like you are shouldering all the pain from this person.

  • 11 years ago

    by Freedom

    Beautiful words,nice expresions,interesting.i especially liked line:

    "Give me these tears which flow from your eyes"