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I liked this poem and i liked how you asked him to be your with a very beautiful way
All poem was nice. but i realy liked one line alot
Why it is so hard to follow your heart
so hope for the best in the next. take care 5/5
A very nice write.. a well expressed piece.. keep them coming
Wow really good
Hey, really love this poem, It's great.
Guess you were thinking about the one you love when writing this poem.
I love this part " Give me these tears which flow from your eyes," It's like you are shouldering all the pain from this person.
Beautiful words,nice expresions,interesting.i especially liked line:
"Give me these tears which flow from your eyes"