I liked this poem and i liked how you asked him to be your with a very beautiful way

All poem was nice. but i realy liked one line alot
Why it is so hard to follow your heart

thts it.

so hope for the best in the next. take care 5/5

A very nice write.. a well expressed piece.. keep them coming

Wow really good
like it
5/5

Hey, really love this poem, It's great.
Guess you were thinking about the one you love when writing this poem.

I love this part " Give me these tears which flow from your eyes," It's like you are shouldering all the pain from this person.

Beautiful words,nice expresions,interesting.i especially liked line:

"Give me these tears which flow from your eyes"