Gr8 work dear
Keep it up
5/5

That was the type of poem i needed to read, thankz, that was really really good going through the exact same feeling. and you expressed everything so well. xx

"Say you need me, that I matter, that you care
Yet whenever I need you, you're never there
Say you need me, that I matter, that you care
Yet whenever tears fall, all you do is stand and stare"
My favorite stanza..
Yet again a wonderul poem..
I can relate as well, many people have friends that say they are your friend but then do something to hurt you, its life and its Society these days, and its cruel.
and you've pointed it out in this poem
Good job.
xoxo
--Chelsey

Aww. so sad! I know how you feel. I love this poem so much b/c of the word choice and the flow and the meaning behind the words. Great Job!
*~NearlyCrazy6~*

I liked this poem a great deal the description was right on and the message again was really clear well done. Plot121