Comments : The World I See

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Your spelling is fine, here and there are little mistakes but it doesn't matter.... your word choice is amazing! nice words to really describe it better.

    well done, 5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Alone in the crowd

    OMGG this is a fantastical poem and i believe and agree with everthing that you wrote about. Keep Writing.