For a rather long poem, I found this poem to be very well written, I love the word choice, it flowed fantastically..you are very talented. Timothy r

Wow... I love this from the beginning to the end, you created so powerful and vivid imagery. Your descriptions in this whole piece intrigued my imagination completely, and I'm still stunned by your words.
Whole message of this poem is very deep.
What I admire the most is the flow that this piece has, it's truly excellent.
Keep writing!
5/5 from me

A very deep and intense poem, very well penned!
I am giving you 5/5.

Best wishes,

Ingrid
ps: Could you take a look at my latest poem called Carlos. It is my first acrostic poem and I don't know wether it's good or not!