I think each line drags on a little, but otherwise- it's good
keep writing

Awl! this is totally cute! its sad and just whicked cute! good work! 5/5

Good one//i have alot of poems about lost reltionship....cuz the same thing just happened to me..but good job=]

Thank u 4 a short n sweet comment. I would be lying if I say that I liked your comment. About your poem, its a very nice poem but the thoughts are not exactly coming to you. Grammatical mistakes can be avoided. Use punctuations. But a very very nice work. Keep improving. Well done. Bye.

Eww men are sooo DUMB!!!! ARGHHH
well not all, but yeah I SOO UNDERSTAND!!! its so uncivil!!! WHY DO PEOPLE DO THAT!?!?!? freaks!!!!
I really liked it ^_^ aww sad though
=/ happens!?!?

=D