Very interesting unique and i liked it 4/5

It was very unique, but it didn't really make sense to me. though i loved the message behind this piece, it sorta confused me with your words, but it was well written.

nikki

Freakin awesome haha check out my poems i think u'll like a a few

I agree with what the others have stated. A very unique piece and one I truly did enjoy. I really do like the language you used. Well done *5/5*