I know exactly what you're talking about in this poem. i loved it.

"The flavour of your lips became my favourite appetite
Your seducing words were the perfect drug"

^those lines, oh goodness, they are too good Sarah. The whole poem is so very ture..and deep. I'm sure so many girls can relate to this.
Love is a wonderful thing, untill it's gone, then it can be the worst thing that's happened to us. And the funny thing is, no one really realises the worht untill it's too late.
That poem is beautiful..you manage to make pain sound beautiful. Amazing! I LOVE this. keep it up! =]
--Viola

That happened to me last year, im completely over it, but your poem reminded me of what i felt at the time. :p

i loved it, it's amazing! ;) keep it up.

5/5
luv it x

And I'm still hanging on
Being so afraid that our memories
Will soonly vanish completely
Just like you did

That part and the ending line were very very good. Really enjoyed it! So true...so well put!
*ME*