Awh I love this =)

-Taylor

"Her eyes are closed she hasn't moved
But somethings there, she can hear
There's someone calling her name
Wonders if this other world will be The same"
That stanza didnt exactly go with the entire rhythm. The rest of the poem had amazing rhythm though. The rhyme scheme was great! The whole poem in general was really good. It was a sweet story. Great job!

~Morgan~