That was such a sweet poem, i thought it was adorable, i loved every single word of it, and you know how to make a sweet poem, nice work 5/5

nikki

This was such a great poem and it brought a tear to my eye (in a good way) I do agree we steal the stars in the sky for the people we love. Great Write

-Spoken Silence.

I stole the stars, all for you
Tore them from the sky.

I liked that bit.. But your five lines with two rhyming threw me off. Made it a little hard to read. But.. Your poems hold so much element and such a story.. It really is nice. And aside from everything.. Your emotion is so fluid and clear. It truly is touching in a way.

Good job.

x

Aww i love that little expression of stealing stars in the sky. it wa sa sweet and subtle poem that conveyed much feeling. amazing 5/5!
<3Kissofthewind

Aww beautiful and cute. You had very strong imagery in this. Loved that. I could never get enough from cute love poems, so adorble! And emotion is so strong and pure.
Flawless
5/5 Keep up!

Well... you have eleven comments on every poem but this one on your latest poems page. isnt that ironic? xD

Wow, that was a very nicely written great poem, u hav done a great job dear, keep it up

Very refreshing and greatly written. Your feelings are fantastically described in whole piece. The repetition of the first two lines in the last stanza is quite effective. I like the idea for this poem, whole piece is truly touching.
Keep writing :)
5/5

This was a very sweet poem, so filled with love and words from the heart, love poetry is definately my favorite category. Once again the words flowed together well and I greatly enjoyed the read. 5/5 once more GG23 P.S. sorry it took me a few days to respond - Take Care