Equelly for you a great poem the wording was great 5/5 and yet the poem was kinda sad...keep upp the good work

I love this one... it's greatly written and very original. I like the atmosphere that you created, and your choice of words in this one is very good.
My favorite stanza is:

-The pain makes them rought
with black flattened hearts
there is no longer a mark of life
just one who ended in strife.-

Keep up!

Unique love poem, I like it from the beginning to the end. You have interesting rhymes and great choice of words through the whole piece. I like the ending, too.

WOWIE !
effing GooD.. indeed.
superbly penned

"..Dancing and smiling
to the climax of the song
they slowly die down
as time goes along.

She looks in her collection
as one stands alive
she picks it up
and tosses it aside..."

great work done here.. amazingly put through
Loved it !

~Wake~

That was great. Keep up the good work.
5/5

Sad poem but oh so beautiful.
Great usage of words in this one.
My favourite stanza's are:

The wailing shrieks
of ultimate pain
are her favorite notes
as all go insane.

Dancing and smiling
to the climax of the song
they slowly die down
as time goes along.

Great write!

5/5

xo angelique

I like this poem alot 5/5 i rated it and thanx for the comment...if u read mine n comment them i'll do the same i need 2 know what others think of my writing...

5/5 very well written.. and great poem
-Tylor

Your poetry is amazing man

WOW! This is soo soo good. I LOVE it. Every line. It really touches me deeply. I especially love this stanza:

"Dancing and smiling
to the climax of the song
they slowly die down
as time goes along."

^Beutiful. It's amazing what words can do. Great work! keep it up. =]
--Viola

^.^ pretty yet sad nice work ^.^ i've read all your poems your very talented, thanks for the coments btw

~Midnight song~

I love this one. its very profound. keep it up.

x

I love this poem. its great and i love how it all makes sence and rhymes w/o it being too rhymy...if that makes any sence. lol. but anyway. AWESOME POEM. keep up the good work

I really liked the line

"The wailing shrieks
of ultimate pain
are her favorite notes
as all go insane."

it really draws your attention to it.
thanks for the comment awhile back, it means alot to me!
lyl~Danni~

This is so tight!
You're an awesome writer. [:

Very wwell done 5/5