Comments : The day she died in my arms

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow a very sad poem i liked the last few lines 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

    • 9 years ago

      by Jose Delapaz

      Thanks yeah the last part was the most important..

  • 16 years ago

    by Ill Give Blood To Your Dried Veins

    Awe, that was so sad and kind of cute at the same time. I loved it. Very well written.

    • 9 years ago

      by Jose Delapaz

      Thank you yes it's sad I got inspired from a movie lol

  • 11 years ago

    by Angel

    Aw this was really sad.
    it was very well written i liked it :)