Wow... Another one deep and amazing poem from you. Your subjects for writing are original and you have a great way with words. You managed to say so much without losing the reader attention through the poem, and that is a great thing. This piece is very touching in so many ways, also very true.
5/5

I like this poem more than the other, especially this line:

We feel the gravity of the generation gap.

That line definitely has an impact on the reader.
Still, though, it seems to be missing the rhythm most poems need in order to be truly influential. Not bad, though... not bad at all.