Oh this is MUCh better than the featured poem. great job!

The words and feelings sure sucked me in! its a short poem BUT short poems are good. keep up the AWSOME work cant wait to read more!!! 100/100

So sad! hey thanks fr the coment on mine too. i'm reading more nw! lol

mandy

Wow thats deep!!!

Wow thast so deep and really well written!!

Short, Sweet and Deep...i absolutely love this...relate to this one as well...flow and word choice was good...keep it up.

Short and to the point i like it
-ellii

I like it alot keep up the great work

Wow. Details are kinda vague. But it still makes you wonder.... message me the meaning of this please. This poem is quite good though. It leaves the reader intriuged. Hmmm 4/5?

Awwww, so sad!
You should capitalize your i's and change 'trew'by 'through' in the third stanza.
Other than that a very sweet poem by you!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Amazing,wonderful,beautiful!!!! well yeah ur a great poet!!!

Wonderful! Brilliant! I Love It!
Keep Writing!
5/5

~ally

Truly a u have writena amazing piece here. full of sadness and regret u have done in the past. i can realte regret things i have done. i really like it.

TaKe CaRe Always,
Frenchy