Last sentence is amazing, just as the rest.
You know those poems that have like one amazing line in them? And, you just fall in love with it and drool over it.
Well, that's your poem darling. (:
ILOVEIT.
Keep it up.

Or else.

You had me at the first line with this one.
I kept reading the poem over and over.
A wonderful write, Steakbutt.
Overall Rating: 5.5/5