Wow, thats an awsome peom, good work (thumbs up)

A very strong poem. The image of "boiling tears" to take out the salt (the sting) is a great one.

This was a unqiue and interesting read. I loved the beginning of each stanza because it was deep. The sentence "Boil my tears and dilute the salt" was just perfect. Each word held and important meaning. *5/5*

I loved the images you put in this poem very well done the message was done well over all I gave you a 5 congrads Plot121

Hey i love this poem you wrote it so deep and meaningfully i loved it 5/5 i think itz one of the best pieces ive read! :)

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