Comments : Your betrayal

  • 16 years ago

    by MizzCici

    WOW! i really liked this poem u did a real good job and i can feel ur expression!!!!!well ckeck my poems out and comment for me plz!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka

    Wow.
    i loved it. wow.
    i know how you feel if you feel that way.
    i just lost my best friend.
    she apologized and apologized but turned around and hurt me over and over again.
    it felt like a knife stabbing through my chest.
    but good job!!