This poem is really good. it flows and really drew me in. good job

Andy I really liked this read. You can feel the sadness through the entire piece.

So here I am, watching these endless lands go on forever
Unable to return back home...
Incapable of remembering, if there was ever such a place...
Alone, I hesitate on whom to believe
As one has already failed me, and the other frightens me
^^^
Loved this ending, especially the last line !

Another great read!

I noticed how much your writing has changed and grown since this piece. Awesome !