Comments : Still Here

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "But like a new grown butterfly
    i have to spread my wings and go,
    Just like a caterpillar has to
    leave it's ca coon to grow,"

    I can relate to this so much right now! My dad is kicking off about me moving it out and making it so much harder for me.
    This poem is beautiful and really shows the reality...
    Amazing
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    I absolutely love this poem. It expresses the desire to grow and the conflict to want to stay, and the pain that everyone involved can feel. I know how it feels.