Awww this is sooo sad im sorry!!!

Awwww...this is so sad
but its very well written
wonderful piece hun, full of emotions.
great job.

I thnk that this poem is well writtin...i enjoyed it(not that it's a happy poem)5/5...

Wow..i can relate so much.
my father was abusive.
take care of yourself blake
and u really got a talent.
-Lisa

I like this poem. It has a nice flow. It is sad though. Did this really happen? If it did I truly am sorry. 5/5.

Woe....what a sad message, I know a lot of people can relate to it though.
You have wittten it down well and now you must forget about it and move on, all right?

Best wishes to you,

5/5 Ingrid

I loved it! i hope you are ok. i kow how you feel. great job!

Wow this was just so good, it is so sad i hope your ok!! keep strong.
havnt talked to you in a while, keep it up
defiently 5/5

Wow. its incredible how things like this can happen. the poem itself it rly well written. on one part is shld be changed to are cuz cuts & bruises are plural but its very strong overall & remains so frm beginning to end. Great job

Awww xx that is really go0d and touching
xx loved it xxx
gemma mwahh

Loved it.... very unique... with the 2 lined stanzas....

We've got some good poets in this club.

Keep up the good work.

Colby

I loved it. it is unquie. i can relate to this. but in another way. the flow was very nice. i really love it from beginning to end. Awesome job!
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
frenchy