Comments : Make believe life

  • 16 years ago

    by Saori

    Awww, I loved it.

    You know, I'm a coward too and I live with fears and rarely showing my real me.

    About my poem... secretly yes, arroz. But very secretly. Shh... jaja

    =)

  • This was a good poem, but it seems kind of confusing. I just can't put my finger on what's wrong with it, but there is. It's still a good poem though.

    .:CiNdY:.