Very good,
the last stanza is a bit short

"i lost my life
all for you
but who knew"

i lost my life ,
all for you.
but no one really knew.

adding one or 2 Syllable's
creates a big deference between great poems
and decent poems.

keep up the writing (:
much love

-cass

Herrow.

Love this poem,
You’re very gifted
=]

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Kim Ke, _______<&*]]

Holy crap this was shocking. You have a lot of poems about being with child. Tell me you're not???? Please God please tell me you're not! ANd beautiful poem. A step up above the rest! lol 5/5

Wow r u pregnant?