Comments : Sunrise

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Whole piece is filled with beauty, you wrote it excellently. I like your descriptions a lot, they're so vivid and you created amazing and refreshing atmosphere with them.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -the air smells of the sweetest rose
    although none are growing in sight
    the mountains are covered with angel white snows
    the chill is leaving from night-

    Keep up!