Aww this one is also sweet its so cute i love it... reminds me of my bf

"I don't know how to be without you" and "Without you I couldn't live" lines are not ok dear. try revising it and dnt say couldnt live, say cant or cannot live. Overall 4/5

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You certainly have a way with words and with short pieces too. You effectively expressed the emotions in a small package and I enjoyed it to the fullest. flow was dead on 5/5