Comments : Heart Ache (Senryu)

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Lovely keep it up your really great
    5/5
    polaroid

  • 14 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    I like the idea of this poem but i think it would come to gether more if it was 'slowly fade' istead of 'fade slowly' but what do i know your the first comment ive left in two years lol