Comments : A wakening promise

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I can really relate to this poem. I think the emotion is hidden but after each stanza it opens up and thats what makes this poem unique. Well penned and Well Done!!!!!

    My favourite stanza was: Feelings long ago forsaken,
    have now begun to waken.
    A blazing fire in my heart,
    I cannot even begin to thwart.

  • 16 years ago

    by chiildhoodMEMOiiRS x

    Herrow.

    Love this poem,
    You’re very gifted
    =]

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    Kim Ke, _______<&*]]

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Fave stanza:

    "Her pure smile began to shine,
    held a heavenly glow Divine.
    Has started to patch the hole,
    that had grown so in my soul."

    an inspiring piece of amazing poetry. well written in every way possible 5/5 keep writing!!

    xD Happy Thoughts xD
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~