Wow... Sorrowful piece yet so beautiful... I can relate to this piece. You created great flow here.
My favorite stanza is:

-I will go down with the sun
In the red-colored horizon
The moon will roam alone
From this night on and on-

Excellently written piece, with marvelous descriptions filled with sadness.

Death of sun coming along
Broken and cold I go on
In this dying afternoon
Lonely poet longs for the moon

This poem starts from the deep meanings
Lovely !
I cant stop my hands to vote this poem 5/5

this line was also touching "May the wind sing him this last song!"
Biya

Wow!!! so much of feelin and raw pain - very very beautifully written!!

My fav line wat : May the wind sing him this last song.

Fantastic piece!!

Thanks for the comment on mine :)