Yeah it was cute and funny (though it was kindda disgusting to pick up the dropped chewing gum and put it back into his mouth, oohh how does it taste?) haha.. i can clearly see the picture. and hey, the flow and the words you chose are cute and really jives with the scene. great work!!

Ha ha lol
What an idiot (no offense intended...)
The repetition and flow works really well in this piece, Love it
DnB

Ok, now i believe you that he is dumb, i love this poem, although i agree it is a piece that you had to be there to see in person, but even reading about it, i think i get how stupid he is, no offence. 5/5 though

nikki

Hmmm, i can relate to that. good job
4/5

Thats sooooooo funny

Interesting, I liked the repetitive style, very creative although I saw a mistake in this line;

'there's ant ant crawling on the floor'

It should be there's an ant crawling on the floor. Anyway, good job. keep it up.

Lol that was funny!!!!! i think he was stupid(no offence) keep it up

Good Job...