This is such a beautiful write.
The imagery you painted in this was beautifully done, it created very vivid pictures for me.
Your flow was perfect throughout the entire piece, and although at times it was filled with such melancholy, it was still such a beautiful write and a beautiful read.

That was soo beautiful and sweet.. good job expressing urself. very well written xx

I remember feeling like this when my fiance and I didn't see each other as much as we wanted, so I can really realte to this. You definately expressed the feeling well, and the flow was just amazing. 5/5

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I love how you put soo much emotion into your work i can tell you are really in love 5/5