I really loved this poem. i would have given you first and second place but that probably wouldnt have been fair huh? well 5/5 definately. i love your poems

["At least fake it," She slowly sighs,] -- You don't need to capitalise the 's' on "she".

I really liked this. It was sad, but well written. The second stanza was my favourite. It just stood out for me more than the others.

Really well done.