Comments : Incessant flow

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    A very thoughtful inspiring poem who have penned.Enjoyed reading it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    Alka, you say that I am a great poet, but you don't give yourself enough credit. Reading this poem puts any poem that I have ever written to shame. You are a wonderful writer and I loved every word and every verse of this poem. I am really looking forward to reading more of your work. I haven't been around much lately because school has been hampering me down. So much work and so little time. lol. Keep up the great work.

    Your friend
    Letty

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Alka mendiratta
    Great job on this piece. Really makes the reader stop and think.

    Control
    By remembering
    The ALMIGHTY

    What very strong words. Yet how true they are. Remember everyday who gave us life. Give praise.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very inspiring poem. And very true.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Much beautiful message and also the format looks very good on the page..and yes the Almighty should be remembered and praised always!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I really liked the format that this was written in. It was a good poem that flowed nicely, that i enjoyed reading.. Very clever write.
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Such a wonderful message portrayed and well written. 5/5, Em x