Great poem

Aww thats so sad! :(

I like it, but I am confused....why did it have to end? U loved her!! Don't walk away!!

Yeah why did you walk away from it??
i mean you still have the chance to make everything right and if this person dont want to become a friendm

but its really good

Its good i like it....check out my poems....comment honestly....PLZZZ

A beautifully written poem.....i love the way your poems flow....there simple yet have a powerful message.....Im sure a lot of people could relate to this.....i definetly loved the last part
"Im sorry i loved you
Im sorry she cried
This relationship has
Now officially died"
your an excellent writer...keep it up..ill be looking forward to reading more:)

p.s-btw thank you for commenting on my poem....it means a lot:)

That was a great poem and i'm sorry you had to go through that

Very nice. 5/5