Comments : My Love

  • 12 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    LOVE IT!

  • 11 years ago

    by NuovoVesuvio


    I've been on this site for a long while before this account and you were always one of my favourite poets. But it's amazing to see how far your poems have progressed. Boy is this good!

    I love the iambic tetrameter. It's almost a Shakespearen sonnet (minus the extra two syllables on each line, but that is trivial), but you gave it an extra two lines at the end. This actually makes the final, desolate meaning a lot more powerful. Well done.

    Some of the lines are actually really beautiful, and that's hard to do in such poems without being clichéd; 'when love was night and night was bliss'. Simple but lovely.

    Good shizzle.