I've been on this site for a long while before this account and you were always one of my favourite poets. But it's amazing to see how far your poems have progressed. Boy is this good!
I love the iambic tetrameter. It's almost a Shakespearen sonnet (minus the extra two syllables on each line, but that is trivial), but you gave it an extra two lines at the end. This actually makes the final, desolate meaning a lot more powerful. Well done.