Comments : Invisible web

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Cathy
    so very sad and gut wrenching. Hope things are getting better for you.
    Take Care
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Cathy,
    So sad of a situation indeed, as I was in this situation and felt the very same thing. Best wishes for you.
    Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Hey

    i think this was really good. I liked the imagery in the poem and how you described the message through, well in this case a spiders web.

    "I'm breaking away from this invisible web, I will not get tangled up again "

    I really like that part. I think it really drives it home.

    Kelly
    xx