A wonderful day, beautifully put into words. Now most people will wonder to themselves whether you were actually going through these things, I remember seeing the look in your eyes when we were waiting to go in .. I don't think i've ever seen someone so wrought with worry and anguish.

Wonderful sentiment bro, hope she likes the poem.

[5/5]
~Pete.

What a beautiful poem! I truly enjoyed reading this one and I could just feel the love all throughout it.

"My heart is hers forever,
And this will be the proof."
^my fave line .. amazing

*5/5*

Wonderful write. I loved it. Great work and keep up the amazing work.

Peace, Joe

Lolz emma i think u meant reading it!!

:)

Beautiful piece of poetry.It really shows love and other emotions to your wife.I think it would be better if you put it in 4-line stanza's though.A 5/5 from me.
Keep writing,
Miranda

Aw, this was so sweet. It was truly a beautiful piece of love poetry. I must say your wife is very lucky. Iwish my boyfriend would write me something like this. lol

marcella