Aww, really interesting. Flowed really greatly and nice wording. Though I didn't get what this poem is about - a competition between 2 person who is better/has better thingys or just a fight or something 3rd? :)
Amazing work on this! 5/5
Keep up!

Wow, this is really raw, full of strong emotions, it flows really well, and again reads like it should be a song... i can imagine the events behind this poem if that makes sense!
5/5 fabbylous :)
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