Nice work...i gave u a 5/5

A common scenario and a common poem.. actually in short it sound so cliche but u still manage to bring it up in your style that made it a very nice piece.. short but a direct poem, easy to comprehend and easy to relate with. although it'
short, you still managed to unleashed the right emotion in each lines. good work!!

If it's about waiting i can tell more about it...
very nice poem, i liked it