I liked this piece quite a bit. I think some parts didn't fit in like your fourth stanza, but it had a VERY strong beginning, and a slightly less strong ending, so overall, it was pretty good! I appreciate all your comments. Feel free to share your favorite parts, or parts you think I could work on in my poetry as well! Always helps!
*ME*

Reminds me of my ex i hate when they do that great pomes nice work

I liked ya poem a lot...its so true,gladly all boys aren't like that
Good job
~KISSES~