That was a beautiful poem

I like the AB rhyme format, works very well. Your word choice is great, the poem is very fluid. I love it!
sincerely,
Me.

"my life it was. . . " << my life [[,]] it. . .

Amazing poem, once again. Honestly, the best so far. (: You're A GREAT writer, as I've said already . Lol.

My comments are probably a bit useless, but there's nothing I can honestly find wrong with them, other than a few minor things like commas and such.

Amazing job. (:
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