Hey nice poem, kinda makes me sad, makes me think of my ex, I still wanna be with her but she has him, blah I wanna leave so we have a chance of being friends later on but she wont let me.

Good job i liike it!!!

Hey.
nice poem. it was....well it is a great poem.
i really liked it.

Guess the end r kinda the same in most relationships!! thats life(sucks)
but nice..keep t up!!