Comments : Coming in and going out

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Wow, This is pretty intense. I felt empathy for the child whether real or imagined that was lost long ago behind the facade of the cigar smoke meaning to congratulate the birth. A remarkable poem as always.

    Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    Very good poem, very meaningful

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very poignant and powerful writing John