Really like this idea, whiting a poem through the eyes of Fear. I would have liked to see this a little bit longer .. although you get alot across in just a few stanza's.

I would have liked to see something about how you get into people, and what effects you can instill within them etc..

Still well worthy of a 5 in my opinion.

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~Pete.

Yet again a great write. Short and to the point. Keep up the amazing work.

Peace, Joe

"dreams" shouldn't be plural there. It doesn't sound right. Great concept, I like point of view. Nonetheless a great write. 5/5

marcella

SO true. I love your poetry, you touch on some really interesting topics. personification in this piece is brilliant. I really like your style.
DnB