Comments : The beautiful game

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    Sweet!
    United Road, take me home
    To the place, I belong;
    To Old Trafford, to see United;
    Take me home, United road

    Get in! Nice work bro, I honestly don't believe I haven't had this idea already. Great idea, i think you have inspired me to give a United poem a bash.

    Simply 'cause it a red poem ..
    [6/5]
    ~Pete.

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Hahaha, reminds me of playing kickball in elementry school. Great write with a good flow and structure. Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    ^^
    what he said.

    The whole poem was amazing and your rhymes were flawless! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Great job with this piece. Very original, I don't think I've read anything on this sight about a sport. The rhyme and flow were wonderful. 5/5

    marcella