Comments : In My Dreams...

  • 16 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Awww i know how you feel and that sucks because i dont really like this feeling this way but then i you know theres nothing i can do about it. Well this is a great poem ... i love the last 2 stanzas....

    in my dreams you take away my sorrow
    for our love there's always a new tomorrow
    in there i can tell you everything i feel
    babe,i love you and this is so very real

    i wish i can see you to show you what my words really means
    but till that day come,i will see you in my dreams ...

    that is a wonderful ending because it has so much meaning it and its just great. 5/5